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List of Responses

Dear Editors and Reviewers:

Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our

manuscript entitled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号). Those comments are all valuable

and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important

guiding significance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and

have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are

marked in red in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responds to

the reviewer’s comments are as flowing:

Responds to the reviewer’s comments:

Reviewer #1:

1. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)

Response: ××××××

2. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)

Response: ××××××

。。。。。。

逐条意见回答，切忌一定不能有遗漏

针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用：

We are very sorry for our negligence of ……...

We are very sorry for our incorrect writing ……...

It is really true as Reviewer suggested that……

We have made correction according to the Reviewer’s comments.

We have re-written this part according to the Reviewer’s suggestion

As Reviewer suggested that……

Considering the Reviewer’s suggestion, we have ……

最后特意感谢一下这个审稿人的意见：

Special thanks to you for your good comments.

Reviewer #2:

同上述

Reviewer #3:

××××××

Other changes:

1. Line 60-61, the statements of “……” were corrected as “…………”

2. Line 107, “……” was added

3. Line 129, “……” was deleted

××××××

We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the

manuscript. These changes will not influence the content and framework of the

paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.

We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that

the correction will meet with approval.

Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions

以下是审稿人意见和本人的回复。与大家分享。

从中可以看出，这位审稿人认真读了文章，提出很多宝贵的意见。这些意见

分布在文章的各个地方。我很诧异有人真正读了我的文章。看到这些意见，

我觉得很感激，不是因为接收文章的原因，而是这些意见能真正有助于提高

文章的质量。

从中还看出，回答审稿人问题的“技巧”。

对于回答问题，有的人就是一味反驳，却不加改进。

记得ACS Style Guide里面说，当审稿人问到问题的，哪怕是他理解错误，这

也说明作者这么写，其他读者也会理解错误，引起歧义。因此，作者就是要

修改句子，使表达不引起歧义。

因此：有时间一味反驳，还不如指出具体改进在第几页、第几段。

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #3: While revising the script, it is to be suggested that author should

clearly indicate the aim & scope of the study and while making conclusion, it is to

be mentioned how the study is useful for the practical purposes. In addition the

following are the few suggestions/comments, which may be included while

revision.

1. Introduction part first para last line, author must avoid to write ambiguous

, much work is still ahead, may indicate properly.

2. Author could not demonstrate the reason why, to select the organic

compound such as ethyl pyruvate for this study?

3. Experimental part: It is difficult to understand the in-situ RAIRS experiments

with homemade liquid-solid RAIRS cell. More detailed information may be useful

for the others those who are working in the area. Photograph of the assembled cell

may be included.

4. The description given for the experimental set up (page 4) can be presented

by flow diagram instead, as an ease to understand the set up.

5. Resluts Part (Page 6): "CO adlayers with identical monolayer coverages", the

monolayer coverage, is it been performed with some adsorption model? Further, it

was suggested that CO-saturated Pt surface, but not mentioned about the

saturation experiments. Is it obtained after 60 min of CO bubbling?

6. Page 12, 2nd para: The displacement of EtPy by CCl4 flushing, is it confirmed

by the EtPy peaks? If so, it has to be mentioned clearly in the para. Also in the same

para, author referred for Fig. 7a and 7b but in the figures, it didn't appear, only

figure 7 appeared. I feel it refers for figure 7, portion A and B, to be corrected.

Similarly, in the text referred the fig 2a, 2b. etc but on the figure sheet it is

mentioned as 2A, 2B .etc. to be corrected.

7. Page 14, 1st para: 'contamination of the Pt surface by corrosion of o-rings in

high concentration EtPy', but the statement has not been supported by other

evidence/literature.

8. Pages 14 through 17: the observed reactivity of various solvents for

adsorbed CO on the Pt surface (figs 3 & 4) has to be discussed more precisely. This

reviewer is unable to follow the reason why they showed different reactivity, is it

principally due to the organic moieties, or due to the impurities of commercially

available chemicals or a mixed effect. It has to be clearly demonstrated, however,

the only experiment performed with CO/water? CCl4 would difficult to describe it

in detail.

9. The author try to restrain with repeated arguments in the , page 3

para 1: It was ., also appeared on page 21 first para.

10. Captions of the figures are too long, the detailed description already given

in the text, hence would not be included here. Captions should be short and crispy.

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Dear Editor,

I quite appreciate your favorite consideration and the reviewer’s insightful

comments. Now I have revised the JCIS-06-247 exactly according to the

reviewer’s comments, and found these comments are very helpful. I hope this

revision can make my paper more acceptable. The revisions were addressed point

by point below.

[general] The objective of this research was added at the beginning of the

third paragraph of Introduction. How the study is useful for practical purposes was

added at the end of Conclusion as one paragraph.

[1] Ambiguous , “much work is still ahead” was deleted.

[2] Ethyl pyruvate was used here as a typical compound (containing two

carbonyl groups) to demonstrate the feasibility of using our diagnosing tool to

detect low-coverage CO (coming from decarbonylation of EtPy) at the liquid-solid

interface. EtPy is a reactant used in liquid-phase chiral catalysis, and slight

decomposition of EtPy to adsorbed CO was reported to influence the catalytic

performance. In addition, by studying that, we can directly compare our results

with previous studies. More details in the first paragraph of Section 3.2.

[3] The IR cell was designed according to the IR cells used by many

electrochemical workers. References were added. A photo was given in the

Supporting Information.

[4] A flow diagram of the experimental setup was given in the new Fig. 1.

[5] The CO adsorption experiments were performed in the same adsorption

mode, by bubbling CO through a clean Pt surface in different days to achieve the

same saturation coverage of CO. Initial experiments indicated that given the CO

bubbling rate was 0.85 cm3/min, CO can saturate on Pt after 30-45 min. We

bubble CO for 60 min to guarantee the same CO coverage. If we bubble CO for

more time, or if we increase the CO flowing rate several times, the CO saturation

coverage doesn’t change, indicating 60 min is already enough. A figure showing

the CO uptake as a function of bubbling time was given in the Supporting

Information.

[6] The displacement of EtPy by CCl4 was confirmed by the removing of EtPy

peaks. The mention of Fig. 7a and 7b etc. throughout the text were all corrected.

[7] It is known that some solvents such as acetone can corrode the Viton

o-ring. We saw the damage of o-ring after using high-concentration EtPy. A

reference to the Viton o-ring information was given.

[8] The observed reactivity trend is due to a combination of both effects, with

the accumulation of organic moieties on Pt surface during numerous flushing

cycles the more important reason. A few proper sentences were added to clarity

this point.

[9] The repeated arguments in the first paragraph in Section 4.3 were deleted.

[10] The too-long captions were significantly shortened.

In all, I found the reviewer’s comments are quite helpful, and I revised my

paper point-by-point. Thank you and the review again for your help!

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结果：

/10.1016/.2006.09.005

欢迎浏览：

Organic Chemistry on Solid Surfaces (Review)

Z. Ma, F. Zaera*, Surface Scence Reports 61 (2006) 229-281.

ScienceDirect TOP25 Hottest Articles in Chemistry

/10.1016/p.2006.03.001

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修改稿回答审稿人的意见（最重要的部分）

List of Responses

Dear Editors and Reviewers:

Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our

manuscript entitled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号). Those comments are all valuable

and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important

guiding significance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and

have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are

marked in red in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responds to

the reviewer’s comments are as flowing:

Responds to the reviewer’s comments:

Reviewer #1:

1. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)

Response: ××××××

2. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)

Response: ××××××

。。。。。。

逐条意见回答，切忌一定不能有遗漏

针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用：

We are very sorry for our negligence of ……...

We are very sorry for our incorrect writing ……...

It is really true as Reviewer suggested that……

We have made correction according to the Reviewer’s comments.

We have re-written this part according to the Reviewer’s suggestion

As Reviewer suggested that……

Considering the Reviewer’s suggestion, we have ……

最后特意感谢一下这个审稿人的意见：

Special thanks to you for your good comments.

Reviewer #2:

同上述

Reviewer #3:

××××××

Other changes:

1. Line 60-61, the statements of “……” were corrected as “…………”

2. Line 107, “……” was added

3. Line 129, “……” was deleted

××××××

We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the

manuscript. These changes will not influence the content and framework of the

paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.

We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that

the correction will meet with approval.

Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.