剑12test1大作文范文

剑12test1大作文范文

1.剑10 test1 小作文什么意思

剑10test1 小作文，家用能源和气体排放 The above two

charts depict the Austrilianhousehold energy use

and the corresponding gas emissions of each type of

the first pie chart we could see

thatwater heating and heating are two major types

of energy use, which occupies 30%and 42% of all the

energy used in one household. Other appliances use

15% ofthe energy, and then refrigeration, lighting

and cooling, which share the left13% of

s in the second chart are

quitedifferent from that of the first chart.

Heating, which consumes 42% of a household'senergy,

only emits 15% of all the gas that one household

produces. But the gasemission and energy use of

water heating are pretty even, at around 30%. Costs

only7% of all the energy, refrigeration produces 14%

of all the gas, which goes forthe condition of other

appliances and the figures are 15% and 28%, and for

thecondition of lighting, 4% and 8%. Cooling

consumes 2% of energy and contributesto 3% of gas

sum up, water heating and

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heatingconsume 72% of energy and produces only 47%

of gas. Refrigeration and otherappliances, though

only use 22% of energy, emit 42% of gas.大作文， 教

小孩是非观要不要从小时候就开始教， 要不要

punishment Indeed, children need to learn how to

tellright from wrong as they grow into adults. But

as far as I am concerned, it isbetter for us to teach

this ability to them when they are older rather than

atan early age. Moreover, certain punishments are

required to make sure childrencould behave

starter, it would be easier for us

toteach children about the difference between right

and wrong when they becomeolder. Young children,

due to their lack of life experience, have

difficultiesin understanding moral lectures.

However, after they grow up a little, theycould

better digest the meaning of what is right and wrong

based on their pastexperience, thus will grasp the

notion of right and wrong more easily

rly, older children tend to

know moreabout punishment, and will be able to learn

from the punishment caused by theirfail to

recognize the distinction between right and wrong.

Punishment mighthave long-lasting influences on

younger children for they are too fragile.

Olderchildren, on the other hand, could handle

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punishment more with ease and couldfigure out the

reason they got punished. Therefore, they could

gain betterunderstanding about right and wrong than

younger children sort of punishment for

parents andteachers to use whey they are trying to

punishment, the teaching process would be more

productive.。

2.剑七test3大作文怎么写

天气渐渐转暖，万物渐渐复苏。留下的是枯萎的草，凋

零的花，结了冰的小河。而这，春姑娘却不放在眼里，

teach children about good behavior is asubtle issue. 他把轻纱般的袖子轻轻一拂，花儿冒出了花骨朵，小草

But the function of punishment is undeniable. It is

necessary topunish a child because of his or her

wrong acting. I suggest to use criticizeor physical

training, such as asking children to do cleaning,

as conclude, teaching children about

rightand wrong should be waited until children

become older. Accompanied by certainways of

长出了嫩芽，小河里的冰也化了。啊！春天来了。

看！家里的那盆吊兰，重新开出了花，阵阵花香扑鼻而

来，令人心旷神怡。走出家门，我看见 院里那棵白杨树

长出了的绿色的小芽，多像一个美丽的小天使啊！一阵

春风拂过，树上已经长出来的嫩叶在风中轻轻浮动，好

像在说：“好清凉的风呀！'

走到小河边，只见岸边的杨树也抽出了嫩绿的柳丝，正

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轻轻抚摸着大地，那绿油油的小草和那五彩缤纷的花儿，

在杨柳妈妈的抚摸下，小草长出了嫩叶，花儿们也渐渐

开出了五颜六色的花，一丝丝，一缕缕，都像赶集似的

聚拢来，像开一个比美大会似的；河水的冰也融化了，

阳光照射到水面上，河面上波光粼粼，那波纹就好像春

天的五线谱，而那光芒却是跳动着的音符，他们在弹奏

着一首春天的赞歌。几只小燕子在河面上掠过，尾尖偶

尔沾了一下水面，就看到波纹一圈一圈荡漾开去。

田野上，农民伯伯正在辛勤地播种，看，那一排排绿油

油的麦苗在春风和阳光的照顾下，茁壮成长，有的麦苗

实在是太调皮了，它居然迎着春风跳起了舞，让原本充

满生机的春天更加活泼，麦田旁边是一片黄灿灿的油菜

花，菜花在阳光下更加灿烂。我站在这田野中，闻着泥

土的芳香，赞赏着这大自然的杰作，任春风吹拂，任心

潮起伏。啊！这春天真是万紫千红，美不胜收啊！

看，旭日正在升腾，让我们张开双臂，去拥抱着美丽的

春天吧！

3.【雅思剑5test1小作文求评价

The line graph describes some data about the

percentage =》是不是可以改成 The line graph

describes the percentage。

aged 65 and over =》aged 65 and older As can be seen

from this line graph,there is an increasing trend

in the number of old people in three

precisely,the percentage of population went up

gradually from 9% in 1940 to 15% in 1982 and it will

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remain stable at 14% in 2021（那个国家？）.After that

（去掉？），the proportion of population aged 65 and

over is expected to reach 23% in rly

（跟什么说similarly，前后说的好像不一样） ，the

proportion of population age 65and over in Sweden

accounted for 7% in 1940 to 26% in 2040（对将来数

据的预测，时态是否不对？）.While,the percentage of

population aged 65 and over in USA remained steady

at 5% by the end of 2021,After that,there is a

substantial surge and occupies at 27% in 2040（对

将来数据的预测，时态是否不对？）.Therefore,it

shows that the percentage of 65+ people are soring

moderately in the next three decades.（ 未来三年

应该是数据预测，不是shows吧.，另外，soring

moderately，适度的飙升？有点矛盾？）soring =>

soaring。

4.雅思小作文批改（剑5test1）

The graph illustrates the dramatic comparison of

the population proportion aged 65 and over from year

1940 to 2040 in three countries.

In Japan, it's population proportion started in the

year of 1940 at a tendency of going from 5% to

approximate 3% in 1960, followed by a stable trend

before restarting to the original level in year 2000.

In view of Sweden and USA, which both countries

demonstrate a constantly increasing movement of the

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population, started itself from 7% and 9% to 16% and

14% respectively during the same period as Japan.

It is worth mention that the expected proportions

in three countries, especially Japan are blessed

with a noticeable rising of population, which

raised sharply to 27% over the last two decades. As

to the other countries, Sweden and USA have all

experienced a moderate increase in population by

hitting to 25% and 24% each, although Sweden

suffered from a little turbulence in years from 2000

to 2021.

楼主英文水平很好，接近西方的结构写作，但语法稍微

注意一下，有个别词汇还是要了解一下运用的方法，（英

文同义单词很多，但写作时每个都有不同的用途）。还有

尽量不要写数字，像 3 countries 要写成 three

countries 看起来会比较正式一点。

我尽量改的都改了，也不会是完全对，只给LZ一个参考。

5.作文范文

寒假里，我去阿姨家拜年，吃饭后出来转悠，结果发现

叔叔原来工作的那所化工厂已经搬空了，怎么回事？听

大人们说，这厂里最近几年效益可好了，年终奖金都不

少，公司运转得很不错，怎么突然间就关门了，我站在

那里望着那所空空的房子，百思不得其解，阿姨似乎看

穿了我的心思，笑着说：“你知道什么叫臭氧吗？”“啊？

哦，我知道，臭氧层是指距离地球25-30公里处，臭氧

分子相对富集的大气平流层。它能吸收对人类有害的太

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阳紫外线，保护地球上的生命免遭短波紫外线的伤害。

所以，臭氧层被誉为地球的保护伞。”我因为前两天在网

页上看见过，不假思索地说。 “那你知道臭氧层破坏会

造成怎么的后果呢？”阿姨又笑问道。“这个，我就不知

道。”我不好意思地挠挠头说。“这样吧，我给你找些资

料来。”我跟着阿姨跑回了家。

打开网页，输入“臭氧层的破坏”，百度一下。我知道臭

氧层是地球的一道天然屏障，使地球上的生命免遭强烈

的紫外线伤害。然而，近10多年来，地球上的臭氧层正

在遭到破坏。臭氧层被破坏以后，吸收紫外线的能力大

大降低，使得人类接受过量紫外线辐射的机会大大增加。

并且在人的自身免疫系统出现障碍，患呼吸道系统传染

性疾病、皮肤癌、白内障、角膜肿瘤的人数大量增加；

其次，它会影响农作物的生产，并且会影响水生生态系

统。另外我还知道，过多地使用CFC是破坏臭氧层的主

要原因。我们购买空调、冰箱、汽车、喷雾剂等，应购

买不含CFC的产品。

但是看到现在，我也不明白臭氧层和叔叔的厂关门有什

么联系，阿姨笑着说：“工业中大量生产和使用CFC是破

坏臭氧层的主要物质，而你叔叔的厂……”。这时我恍然

大悟，所有的不解全部揭开，原来为了人类将来的生存

问题，叔叔他们放弃了眼前的利益。“虽然1995年1月

23日联合国大会决定，每年的9月16日为国际保护臭

氧层日。但还有许多人不愿意这样做，怎么办呢？”我

弯着头。“小脑袋还想得挺周到的吗。我给你讲过‘螳螂

捕蝉’的故事，蝉、螳螂、黄雀，它们都一心想着眼前

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的利益，却没顾到身后正隐伏着后患。”阿姨滔滔不绝。

“其实，那些人为了所谓的利益，仍在投入生产和消费

CFC，那些人就像故事中的蝉、螳螂、黄雀，因小失大，

对吧？”我想了想又说。“对，对，我们家谢靖什么时候

懂得那么多啦？”妈妈插了一句，全屋子的人都乐呵呵

的。

---------摘抄的，不知道能帮到你不？

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