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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it is easier to
maintain good health nowadays than it was in the past？
开头：同意现在更容易比以前保持身体健康。（话题引入+他人观点+明确立场+过渡
句）
The desire for good health is universal. From past to present, people have
been striving for physical fitness through any possible ways. The fundamental
importance of being healthy makes itself a permanent topic. Recently, people
begin to ponder over a question: is it easier to maintain good health nowadays
than it was in the past? As far as I am concerned, modern people are more likely to
achieve a good health than people in the past. My reasons and examples are given
below.
中间段 1：现代社会医学发达，很多疾病得以有效治疗和预防。（主题句+说理论证+
细节例子）
Firstly, advanced medical technology makes it possible to control and cure
diseases in an effective way. With the rapid development of science and
technology come breakthroughs in medical science, which has been pushing
medical treatment to a higher level. Scientists have found ultimate solutions to
many diseases that used to be fatal, maintaining people’s health and extending
people’s lifespan. For example, smallpox, an already-eradicated disease, was
once a number-one killer engulfing tens of thousands of people’s lives. Thanks to
the invention of a certain vaccine, people could put an end to this rampant
disease.
中间段 2：现代人能接触到更多的健身设施。（主题句+说理论证+细节例子）
Secondly, it is easier for modern people to get access to sports facilities than
for people in the past. With the government’s mounting investment in the
population’s physical quality, people, especially those living in the city, can find
sports facilities almost everywhere such as basketball courts or Ping-Pong tables
throughout the neighborhoods. Apart from the efforts made by the government,
people’s growing awareness of keeping fit makes health and fitness a giant
business. For example, gyms, skating rinks, and bowling alleys become hits all over
the world. Undoubtedly, those easily accessible sports facilities furnish all citizens
with a chance to be healthier.
让步段：当然，现代人压力大，对他们的健康造成很大的威胁，但是他们若能认识到
这一点，并且放弃不健康的生活方式，他们的身体状况会变好。（承认漏洞+堵漏）
Admittedly, the yearning for a better life and intense competition bring
modern people unprecedented stress. Most people are not able to keep a regular
life. For instance, they go to bed too late and choose to smoke or drink alcoholics
as a way to release pressure, which puts them in the state of sub-health. However,
as long as they could realize the importance of health and give up unhealthy
lifestyles, their health condition will be much better.
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