浙南名校联盟读后续写勇气之声讲义高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写原题目：

When I was in middle school, my family moved to Seatle, where my

parents started their new businessa small grocery store downstairs my house. As

a girl of shy and reserved nature, I had to take a fresh start to fit into the

sophisticated city life.

One sunny day, my school announced an exciting event, a talent show for

the local food ts were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in

front of the public in the city hall on National Day. A buzz of excitement filled

the school as everyone began preparing for the big down, I felt a spark

of curiosity and a desire to participate. However, my selfdoubt held me back, “I

don't have any special skills to share.”

Days turned into weeks, and the talent show drew closer. I couldn't shake

the upsetting feeling until one day Emma, one of the most popular girls in my

class, came to me while I was helping in the grocery store after class.“How about

singing together in the talent show?” She grinned, “I heard you singing a tune,

along the way back home. I can't help following you here. Gosh, I couldn't

believe my ears. Emma, with personality and popularity, acknowledged my little

talent. Since Emma had the world's prettiest voice, I felt like being favoured by

fortune.

“You two? The talent show for the food bank?” My mum bent towards

us and her face lit up.“A big a light bulb seemed to go in her head.

“Why not practise right now upstairs? I bet you'll be a perfect match.” Winking

at us, she seemed to know we were thinking alike.

Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school.

We ged ideas and rehearsed the scene. As the days rolled by,

I was feeling pretty good about our act. But the day before the performance,

Emma called that she had an acute stomachache and was not in any shape to

perform.

Paragraph 1: I was pletely knocked out by the news.

Paragraph 2: Finally came the big moment.

故事概要:

我想参加talent show却缺乏自信同学Emma发现了我的才华，于是邀请我一

起参加。我们勤加排练Emma却在表演日前夕告知我她身体不适，第二天不

能参加表语了。

故事的主题:

超越自我克服自我怀疑和恐惧，自信展示自己的才华。

段首句解读与构思

Paragraph1:I was pletely knocked out by the news.我被这个消息完全震惊了。

我失去了一直帮助我的搭档，我该怎么做？这一段要写出我心境的变化：由

内向变得开朗自信，做出一人上台表演的决心。

Paragraph2:Finally came the big moment.重要的时刻终于到来了。

上台前我心中是什么想法？（也可以具体到细小的肢体动作，如双手发抖）

我在台上表现如何？观众的反应怎么样？在最后要升华主旨：我克服腼腆，

成为自信的女孩。

本文构思特点：

我在准备才艺表演过程中改变了自己，要点明我的态度变化和怎样变化，最

后写出我的成长。

短语积累：

a deep breath 深吸一口气

flies in one’s stomach 紧张，焦虑

on pins and needles 如坐针毡

4. a glimmer of 一丝

and night一直，不间断地

句式积累：

1·It is +adj.+ (for/of sb.) to do/that从句 .../It is +of +n.(+for sb.) to do (对于

某人来说/某人) 做某事是怎么样的

2·Sb.+（think,find,feel等）谓语+ it+adj.+(for sb./sth.) to do/that从句/Sb.+

（think,find,feel等）谓语+ it+n.+to do/that从句 某人认为/发现/觉得……做

某事是怎么样的

3·Not only+助动词/情态动词/系动词+主语+谓语+其他,but+主语+also+谓语+

其他,不仅……而且……

微场景描写1 上台表演 紧张镇定地完成表演

我走上了舞台。我非常紧张，我感到我的舌头很紧，我的头脑一片空白。但

随着同学们友好的微笑，我感到如释重负。我对着他们微笑，试图让自己冷

静下来。我深吸了一口气，开始了我的演讲。我专注于演讲，做了李先生指

导我做的事。我渐渐地沉浸在其中，甚至没有意识到我的演讲顺利地结束了

观众给了我雷鸣般的掌声，李老师满意地给了我竖起大拇指。

I walked onto the stage. I am very nervous. I feel my tongue tighten and my mind

is blank. But with the friendly smiles of my classmates, I felt a sense of relief. I

smiled at them, trying to calm myself down. I took a deep breath and began my

speech. I focused on giving speeches and did what Mr. Li instructed me to do. I

gradually became immersed in it, not even realizing that my speech had ended

smoothly. The audience gave me thunderous applause, and Teacher Li gave me a

thumbs up with satisfaction.

微场景描写2一第一次支持节目的场景 紧张镇定成功

考虑到他为比赛所做的努力，准备充分且自信的梅西深吸了一口气，走进了

足球场。""兴次，他没有漫无目的地追逐球，而是展了他出色的跑动踢和长

传，这帮助Green Lighting控制了比赛。他的心怦怦直跳，继续尽可能快地

跑着，机会终于来了!在场的每个人都屏住了呼吸，后来，球场上爆发出雷鸣

般的掌声。进球了!所有的队友都激动地跑向他，用震耳欲聋的欢呼声把他扔

向天空。梅西松了一口气，最终露出了他胜利的微笑。

Considering his efforts for the game, Messi, who was fully prepared and

confident, took a deep breath and walked into the football field. Xingci, instead

of aimlessly chasing the ball, demonstrated his outstanding running kicks and

long passes, which helped Green Lighting control the game. His heart was

pounding and he continued to run as fast as possible, and finally the opportunity

came! Everyone present held their breath, and later, thunderous applause erupted

on the field. Goal scored! All the teammates ran towards him excitedly, throwing

him into the sky with deafening cheers. Messi breathed a sigh of relief and finally

showed his victorious smile.

[参考文]

was pletely knocked out by the news. Without Emma's voice to guide me, I

would definitely mess up and this was not how everything was supposed to go!

As I stood there, feeling at a loss, a gentle touch on my shoulder brought me back

to reality. It was my mom, wearing a forting smile. After having a brief idea of

my story, she said in a firm tone, “You've worked so hard. You can make it on

your es of countless rehearsal came flooding back, drowning my

fears and losses. Swinging into action, I adjusted my performance to a solo,

practicing in no y came the big moment. Taking a deep breath, I

stepped onto the stage, enveloped in the glow of the lights. At first, my voice

trembled with nervousness, but as the song progressed, my confidence soared. I

poured my emotions into the performance, letting my voice carry my feelings

into the air. The crowd watched in awe, their applause and cheers echoing in the

hall. Facing the overwhelming response, I knew that I had conquered my fears.

Yes, the unexpected discouragement can be a blessing in disguise if we have a

belief in ourselves and never give up our dreams.

词句赏析

es of countless rehearsal came flooding back, drowning my fears and

losses. 无数次排练的记忆如潮水般涌上心头，淹没了我的恐惧和失落。

ng into action,I adjusted my performance to a solo, practicing in no time.

我开始行动起来，把我的表演调整为独奏，很快就开始练习。Swing into action

立即行动起来;solo.独唱;独奏。

a deep breath, I stepped onto the stage, enveloped in the glow of the

lights. 我深吸了一口气，走上舞台，被灯光笼罩着。envelop v.包住;裹住，

这个单词注意拼写，的区别，之前强基联盟续写第二句话都出现了错误。

[巩固检测]

1. 句子翻译:学校里充满了兴奋的气氛，每个人都开始为这个重要的日子做

准备。

仿写:空气中弥漫着兴奋的喻喻声，人群聚集在一起，翘首以盼激动人心的比

赛结束后宣布获胜者。

答案：The air was filled with excited metaphorical sounds, and the crowd

gathered together, eagerly anticipating the announcement of the winner after the

exciting petition.

2. 句子翻译:在内心深处，我燃起了好奇和参与的欲望

仿写:内心深处，一丝好奇和渴望在我心中涌起。

答案：Deep down, a trace of curiosity and longing surged in my heart.