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One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven
three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.
Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and
they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane
was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better
spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long
time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around,
hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but fore
stand, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly
realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag
with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the
more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane
was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in
the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.
She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could
hear water trickling (滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she
followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw
some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in
her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now,
Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her
to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard
a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it
impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes
later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow
blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag
them if they came back again.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark
again.____________
Paragraph2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________________________
(356words)
步
骤
1
概括已知信息：标明核心词、核心句，梳理语篇内容的推
进方向。
Jane
and her husband, Tom,…driven three hours to camp…a
lake in the forest….quarrel… walked away…lost…stop for the
night…rose at the break of day…to a stream…drank and ate a
few berries…hope it would lead her to the lake…heard a
helicopter…Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for
people to see her…A few minutes later, another
helicopter…yellow blouse…
汉语：驱车野营生嫌隙，迷失山林心焚急；
挨饿恐惧度长夜，两架飞机失机会。
步
骤
2
按人物、环境、情节动词等分类划线词：
Underlined key word
Kinds
s and phrases
Character Jane, Tom,
Action walked, climbed
Place lake, stream,
Concrete ThiHelicopter, yellow bl
ngs ouse,
To her great joy, at a
Abstract
distance
步
骤
3 紧扣语境构思情节。分析：
1.
据第一段开头DARK可知，又要在荒野再过一晚。环境描写。大
量心理活动，后悔？想念？期待？坚持？夜里有没有遇到蛇、老虎、
狮子？
2.
据第二段开头WOKE UP可知，第一段应有JANE入睡的情节。
3.
第二段情节可能：醒来看到TOM；OR醒来在医院；OR贵人相
助OR直升机救援；OR独自找到湖。
情节1（搭建本段空白处前后桥梁）
dark again. -Jane tired, hungry---frightened---thought to herself---if
only---miss Tom—tomorrow guide the helicopter---lie beside the stream-
--tigers---hold her breath—quiet—slept
情节2
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. --ate berries and drank some
water---catch sight of a fisherman at a distance---climbed to an open area
together---- To her great joy---helicopter—yellow blouse--rescuers---the
warmest hug---smile satisfied smiles
步
骤
4
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