admin 管理员组文章数量: 1086019
2024年5月26日发(作者：defend词性转换)
The Differences between College Study and High School Study
When I ’m a high school student, I’m longing for the college life very much. From my
point of view, the college study is free and easy . Now I have been staying in the
university for one and a half year which shows that my previous thought isn’t true. It is
very different between college study and high school study .
At high school, the students’ subjects are same. But at college, the students can have
subjects they like. In high school, your teacher often spent time going over the assigned
reading and the assigned problems in class or going over important points again and
again. In college, learning does not take place primarily in the classroom, and you, not
your professors, are responsible for what you learn. In high school, the teacher planned
most of this time for you. In college it is you who must be responsible for this time.
Managing this shift in responsibility is one of the most important things you can do to
increase your likelihood of success.
Knowing the differences in the way learning is structured at college can help you be
successful. The key is to understand how important your time is and to use it well. Here
are some tips for using your learning time effectively:
Plan a balanced schedule of activities including school, work, sleep and fun.
Take good class notes and study your notes as soon after class as possible. If this is
not possible reserve some time the days of your classes to review the material.
Remember academics are your primary responsibility.
College is different than high school, but you can be successful and still have fun.
Get
yourself a good planner, do your scheduling, and have a great year!
When I 'm a high school student, I'm longing for the college life very much.
•
[推荐词汇] very在写作中使用的太多，可考虑换为extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。
Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely difficult to manipulate.
如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
Between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.
一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。
The surface of Mars is remarkably diverse.
火星的表面参差不齐。
He was so informed and intensely forceful.
他是那么见多识广，极了不起。
•
•
[语法检查] a high (Wrong article)
[学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。
college: 多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。
university: 主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。
institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。
school: 指大学所属的学院或系。
academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。
From my point of view, the college study is free and easy .
Now I have been staying in the university for one and a half year which shows that my previous thought isn't true.
•
•
•
[点评] 建议将one and a half year改为one and a half years,这是习惯用法。
[语法检查] a half (Wrong article)
[学习提示] 易混词汇: previous, foregoing, preceding, prior, former 均可表示“在前的”之意。
previous: 指时间上、顺序上较早的，或指正在谈论的某事的前一个。
foregoing: 指前所述的，是following的反义词。
preceding: 特指时间和地位上紧接在前。
prior: 与previous同义，常可换用，但prior有时强调更大的重要性，对比意味强。
former: 系latter的反义词，比prior更着重对比。
•
[错误搭配] half year冠词缺失，建议改为half a year
It is very different between college study and high school study .
•
[学习提示] 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。
different: 普通用词，强调事物间的区别或本质的不同。有时侧重对比，不着重差别。
various: 通常强调种类的数目。
diverse: 语气较强，指性质完全不同，着重显著的区别。
At high school, the students' subjects are same.
版权声明：本文标题：大学英语作文The Differences between College Study and High School 内容由网友自发贡献，该文观点仅代表作者本人， 转载请联系作者并注明出处：http://roclinux.cn/b/1716696107a695741.html， 本站仅提供信息存储空间服务，不拥有所有权，不承担相关法律责任。如发现本站有涉嫌抄袭侵权/违法违规的内容，一经查实，本站将立刻删除。
发表评论